The Line graph illustrates the number of UK daily users of different transportation over the period of 60 years.
The pie charts compare the cultural and leisure
activities
that adolescent
take part in, regarding Fix the agreement mistake
adolescents
of
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boys
and their
Overall
, most youngsters spend their freetime
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free time
on
playing computer games, especially Change preposition
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boys
. While
reading is one of the most
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favorite
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favourite
activities
among young girls
, the opposite was true for boys
and when it comes to listening to music, there was no considerable difference between both genders.
Looking at the boys
chart, most Change to a genitive case
boy's
boys'
boys
prefer to act outdoors in terms of basketball with
26% followed by soccer and skateboarding, at 17% and 11%, respectively. Playing computer games is by far the best choice for Change preposition
at
boys
to do in their pastime, accounting for 34% compared to 16% in young girls
.
On the other hand
, girls
spend more time on indoor activities
such
as dancing, reading and playing computer games. 27% of cultural and leisure activities
in girl teenagers go on dancing, followed by reading with 21% while
the figure for boys
comes last
with only 2%. The other striking feature is listening to music, girls
and boys
share a similar proportion of 10%.Submitted by luudang97 on
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