You and your friend recently went on a holiday together . There is a problem with the photos you have taken during the holiday . Write a letter to your friend to ask for a particular shot .

Dear Jaspreet, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you about issues with
pictures
I clicked recently on our vacations with my personal device. I really enjoyed our vacations in Jammu and Kashmir as it is a very beautiful destination to visit. But I am very disappointed with the
pictures
as they are unclear and the background is
also
not effective. I am writing to request
pictures
you clicked with your technical device. What about the picture we clicked on the shore of the ponds? Please send me all the
pictures
you have in my email. You know I love to collect memories. It will make you happy that I ordered a frame to fix
pictures
in it to make our memories everlasting. Pay regards to uncle and aunt. Sarvjeet Kaur
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