You and your friend recently went on a holiday together . There is a problem with the photos you have taken during the holiday . Write a letter to your friend to ask for a particular shot .

Dear Jaspreet, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you about issues with

pictures

I clicked recently on our vacations with my personal device. I really enjoyed our vacations in Jammu and Kashmir as it is a very beautiful destination to visit. But I am very disappointed with the

pictures

as they are unclear and the background is

also

not effective. I am writing to request

pictures

you clicked with your technical device. What about the picture we clicked on the shore of the ponds? Please send me all the

pictures

you have in my email. You know I love to collect memories. It will make you happy that I ordered a frame to fix

pictures

in it to make our memories everlasting. Pay regards to uncle and aunt. Sarvjeet Kaur

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

134 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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