You recently went on a sightseeing tour which you did not enjoy. Write a letter to the manager of the tour company. In your letter: Explain why you chose that particular tour Explain what you did not like about the tour *Suggest two ways in which the tour can be improved

#tour #manager #company #*explain #*suggest #two

Dear Sir or Madam

This

is to express my disappointment with the recently concluded sightseeing

tour

Norwich

village . I was really excited about the

tour

. As

this

was my first experience of sightseeing in a beautiful

Norwich

village.

Furthermore

this

was planned to explore the beauty of

Norwich

and its culture. But I was totally disappointed to see the village . As it does not meet my expectations. The planning of the

tour

is haphazard and we have to travel back and forth just to see natural beauty. The itinerary is not planned and we have missed a cultural dance performance from

Norwich

villagers.

Therefore

, I would like to suggest you few changes which you can incorporate into your

tour

from now onwards . Like having a detailed route map and including places which are on the same route . so that you can avoid back and forth driving of bus. ,

Also

instruct tourists to complete sightseeing on time so that no scheduled activity will get missed. Looking forward to your quick response. Yours faithfully Mike Deniss

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