You recently went on a sightseeing tour which you did not enjoy. Write a letter to the manager of the tour company. In your letter: Explain why you chose that particular tour Explain what you did not like about the tour *Suggest two ways in which the tour can be improved

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Dear Sir or Madam

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is to express my disappointment with the recently concluded sightseeing

tour

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Norwich

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village . I was really excited about the

tour

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. As

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was my first experience of sightseeing in a beautiful

Norwich

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village.

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this

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was planned to explore the beauty of

Norwich

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and its culture. But I was totally disappointed to see the village . As it does not meet my expectations. The planning of the

tour

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is haphazard and we have to travel back and forth just to see natural beauty. The itinerary is not planned and we have missed a cultural dance performance from

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villagers.

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, I would like to suggest you few changes which you can incorporate into your

tour

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from now onwards . Like having a detailed route map and including places which are on the same route . so that you can avoid back and forth driving of bus. ,

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instruct tourists to complete sightseeing on time so that no scheduled activity will get missed. Looking forward to your quick response. Yours faithfully Mike Deniss

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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181 words

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In writing task describe the data in the two figures below that relate to banks in the UK. Write two or three paragraphs describing the information included in the two figures.

People in major cities suffer from high levels of air pollution, causing health problems for many. What are the main reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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