The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the

UK in 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features

and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the key reasons why people immigrated to England,
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others emigrated to other countries in the world in 2007. As seen, definite jobs accounted for the largest proportion of the main reasons for migration to and from England. The remaining five reasons had a similar percentage for migration to and from the UK in 2007. The rate of immigration into Britain for a definite job was equivalent to that of emigration from the united kingdom at 30% and 29%,respectively.
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, the ratio of those moving to join a family was quite similar, with 15% of immigrants and 13% of emigration. The number of people who left England because of looking for a job was rather high, at around 22%, as the scale of people entering for
this
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purpose was lower, at approximately 10%. A
further
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reason affecting migration was for formal study, at 26% and the figure for emigration for
this
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purpose was only 4%.
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