the tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The numbers that are in
below
tables illustrate the Correct article usage
the below
sales
of Fairtrade of two products which are from coffee and bananas in two years 1999 and 2004 in five different countries that are Use synonyms
UK
, Use synonyms
Switzerland
, Denmark, Belgium and Use synonyms
sweden
.
Change the capitalization
Sweden
Overall
, the Linking Words
UK
had the highest Use synonyms
sales
of coffee. Use synonyms
However
, among others, Sweden had the least Linking Words
sales
. But, for bananas, Use synonyms
Switzerland
sold Use synonyms
the
most of Correct article usage
apply
it
, and Denmark sold the least.
For coffee Correct pronoun usage
them
product
, in 1999 Fix the agreement mistake
products
Switzerland
sold 3 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
Euros
and had Use synonyms
the
first Correct article usage
apply
place
, But in 2004 sold 6 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
Euros
that took third Use synonyms
place
. the second country in 1999 was Denmark with under 2 Use synonyms
million
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Euros
. But after 5 years just added 200 thousand which reached 2 Use synonyms
million
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Euros
with second Use synonyms
place
. In 2004 Use synonyms
Uk
had the highest Use synonyms
sales
among others with 20 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
Euros
. Use synonyms
By comparison
in Linking Words
1999
the Add a comma
,1999
UK
sold 1.5 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
Euros
which was a sharp growth. Use synonyms
Also
, in 2004 among Linking Words
others
Sweden and Belgium could sell just 1 and 1.7 Add a comma
,others
million
Use synonyms
Euros
respectively.
For banana products, Use synonyms
Switzerland
in 2004 and 1999 sold 62 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
Euros
Use synonyms
overall
, which was the highest. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
this
number for the second and third Linking Words
place
(Use synonyms
UK
and Belgium) were about 6.5 and 4 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
Euros
respectively and for other Use synonyms
countries
these numbers were just under 3 Add a comma
,countries
million
Use synonyms
Euros
.Use synonyms
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