IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 1

Scientific developments in farming always bring major benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this statement?

#developments #whit
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
As
faromaers
Correct your spelling
farmers
 play
vital
Add an article
a vital
show examples
 role
for
Change preposition
in
show examples
country
Change noun form
country's
show examples
 economy,to extend various
culters
Correct your spelling
cultures
 of forming brings
lot
Change the article
a lot
show examples
 of profits and strongly with the
statment
Correct your spelling
statement
.
Firstly
Linking Words
 when
considred
Correct your spelling
considered
ancisters
Correct your spelling
ancestors
 time,mainly
majority
Add an article
the majority
show examples
 of the public depends on the harvesting
culters
Correct your spelling
cultures
culture
,as
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
technology improves,methods of it changed so much,many are using advanced technology like
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
utilising tractors and
mechines
Correct your spelling
machines
 to
cutdown
Correct your spelling
cut down
show examples
 the crops,it shows
that
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
how the nature of work changed from working with
manpoer
Correct your spelling
manpower
 to continuing with
mechines
Correct your spelling
machines
,
scientificaly
Correct your spelling
scientifically
proven
Add the auxiliary verb
proved
has proven
show examples
 that ,
falowing
Correct your spelling
following
 natural organic method of harvesting is more
helathy
Correct your spelling
healthy
 than ,using fertilizers,
moest
Correct your spelling
most
 of the population like to have organic food which is healthier .
On the other hand
Linking Words
 many are forming by the methods are not at all acceptable,which leads
health
Change preposition
to health
show examples
 issues,lack of
nutrientes
Correct your spelling
nutrients
,
etyologically
Correct your spelling
etymologically
,if the crops are grown
with
Change preposition
apply
show examples
organic method buy using
organic
Add an article
the organic
an organic
show examples
 method ,compost In
conclusion
Add a comma
,conclusion
show examples
 farmers are always key to the country
,.
Change the punctuation
,
.
show examples
Submitted by karuna.mk220 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: