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Some systems require students to specialize in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school? What are the benefits of two education systems and what is better ?

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 in some nations have to
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 various fields until graduation,
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 others must focus on a narrow
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 of
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 from fifteen years old.
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 the first
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 brings diverse knowledge to its
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, specializing in a limited
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 seems to be better. Regarding the former
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, schools will teach their
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 the basic in every subject. It is believed that diverse knowledge can be used later in people's life.
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, in Vietnam,
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 must complete the basic education program in every subject before seeking specific jobs.
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,
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 kind of learning helps scholars know what subject they are actually good at.
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, career choices will be easier.
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 the
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 in a wide
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 of
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 is good for the student's job choice, the other
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 seems to be better. In terms of specialized
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, scholars will only focus on a small number of
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 to learn and develop. As people concentrate on a limited field, they will learn more professional knowledge of that field.
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, almost every educational environment in developed countries follows
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 and has a high-quality workforce.
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,
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 can have more time for other activities like relaxing, sports or developing their soft skills. That kind of activity can improve the
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 efficiency and academic performance of the
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.
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, focusing on a narrow
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 of
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 seems to be better than studying all. In conclusion,
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 a
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 in a wide
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 of
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 helps
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 in choosing their jobs, I believed that a specialised
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system
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 is better as it can increase performance.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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