You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year old child.Write a letter to the parents .In your letter -explain why would like the job -give details why you would be a suitable person to employ -say how you spend your free time while you are in Australia
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Hello Sir/Madam,
I saw an advertisement in an Australian magazine that you guys are looking for a person, who can take care of your child.
Let me introduce myself, my name is Coco and I am from India but at present, I am in Canada. I like kids so much and I love to spend time with them.
Also
, I enjoy taking care of children. I feel spending time with children heal you from the inside, they are the purest souls on the earth.
Moreover
, I have graduated and have a Nursing degree from back home. Further
, I have my personal support worker certificate from Canada. I have medical experience and with that, I have worked with many families to take care of their loved ones.
If I get selected, then
I will be the happiest person on the earth, because going to Australia was one of my dreams. In my leisure time, Firstly
I will explore Australia. Secondly
, will go shopping. Furthermore
, I will taste a few famous cuisine
.
I hope I will get a positive response from your side.
Yours faithfully
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coherence cohesion
Ensure a clear closing statement to reinforce your interest in the position and conclude the letter positively.
task achievement
Provide a more detailed connection between your skills and the specific needs of the job, demonstrating full engagement with the task.
task achievement
You have effectively expressed your enthusiasm for the job, making a strong personal connection with the position requirements.
coherence cohesion
Your letter follows a clear and logical structure, with each paragraph addressing a specific point in the task.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.