You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You shou

#house #friend #news #neighbourhood #addresses #shou

Dear Mr Patel, I hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health.

This

letter regards to invite you to my new house. To embark with, I would like to brief you about a house I have recently purchased.

Firstly

, it is in the same area you use to live in with a dynamic view of a lake nearby, I had the wish to stay in

this

zone as I admire it when we were kids and visit your place more often.

Additionally

, people living nearby are

also

very generous and happy to help. Even though, they help me with moving and took care of the interiors when I was out for a trip.

Secondly

this

accommodation is spacious with four bedrooms and a dry balcony in each of my rooms.

Apart from

this

, I want you to join the housewarming party which is scheduled for the

last

Saturday of

this

month. Not only, you can attend it as the following day is a week off but it would

also

be a pleasure if you can help me with the arrangements as you have an off day on the

last

Saturday of every month. I hope to see you soon with no excuses. Best regards, Vandan Patel.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

206 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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