The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Used to balance the
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among powerful countries, nuclear
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can help a
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sustain
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independent and powerful
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benefits from
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technology in terms of clean energy might not be accepted by many people, I held an opposite belief, clearly disagreeing with
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an idea. Nuclear
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are symbolic
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strength and
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for that particular
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. Not only these
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held significantly powerful meanings, but
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impact of them was powerful enough to destroy a whole
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. It is true that
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type of innovation is complex and requires extra care,
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, owning
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dangerous
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within a
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is considered risky.
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, A
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without
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impactful technology can be considered
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weak and dependent.
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, North Korea,an isolated yet independent
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about
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their nuclear experiments in order to show its
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to the United States. North Korea’s nuclear experiments terrified many people around the world, and
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may be one of the reasons why other countries avoid conflicts with
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communist
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On the other hand
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, nuclear
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is powerful enough to generate electricity. Despite the tragedy that could happen from the exploitation of
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power
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plants
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such
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as the
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exploitation. Some researchers claimed nuclear
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plants
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generate less pollution compared to coal or fossil oil
power
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plants
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. Able to produce a substantial amount of electricity, the
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plants
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will perform best under a strictly controlled environment and provide valuable resources. In conclusion, keeping in mind the negative consequences that could happen if nuclear
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and nuclear
power
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plants
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were loosely controlled, I believed that the advantages outweigh
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the disadvantages
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Deterrence
  • Mutually assured destruction
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Cost-effective
  • Radiation therapy
  • Proliferation
  • Rogue states
  • Radioactive waste disposal
  • Catastrophic accidents
  • Climate change
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