The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
the maps compare the difference of an industrial area between
layout
of now and planned future development in the town of Norbiton.
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the layout
overall
, the industrial area will plan to have a huge development about
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in
their
layout. factories around the roads are replaced by housing areas. new roads, a bridge and functional buildings
will be built.
Looking at the first map, there are a river and a main Correct pronoun usage
its
road
in the north and south of the area now. the main road
connects northward to a roundabout which also
links to a factory by a road
. also
, there are some factories around the roundabout and the road
.
As we can see from the next map, roads, a bridge across the river and housing in the farmland will be built to connect the roundabout. a new road
will be built to link to housing in the northwest of the roundabout. many shops and a medical centre will be built in the southwest and the southeast of the roundabout respectively. the housing at end of the east road
of the roundabout will be replaced by a school. also
, the east road
will connect northward to a playground and housing will be built around the intersection. a small roundabout will be built at the main road
of the south, which connect to the northern roundabout.Submitted by 13715019386 on
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