The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
the maps compare the difference of an industrial area between
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of now and planned future development in the town of Norbiton.
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, the industrial area will plan to have a huge development
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layout. factories around the roads are replaced by housing areas. new roads, a bridge and functional buildings will be built. Looking at the first map, there are a river and a main
road
in the north and south of the area now. the main
road
connects northward to a roundabout which
also
links to a factory by a
road
.
also
, there are some factories around the roundabout and the
road
. As we can see from the next map, roads, a bridge across the river and housing in the farmland will be built to connect the roundabout. a new
road
will be built to link to housing in the northwest of the roundabout. many shops and a medical centre will be built in the southwest and the southeast of the roundabout respectively. the housing at end of the east
road
of the roundabout will be replaced by a school.
also
, the east
road
will connect northward to a playground and housing will be built around the intersection. a small roundabout will be built at the main
road
of the south, which connect to the northern roundabout.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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