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People who are learning a foreign language can face a number of difficulties. What are some of these problems? In your opinion, what are the best ways to overcome these difficulties?

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Nowadays,
language
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 skills are very important in everyone's life. It helps to enhance
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communication between
people
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People
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 who learn foreign
languages
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,
face
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 a number of
problems
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. I will discuss some of the
difficulties
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 that
people
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face
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while
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 learning an alien
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 and
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, explain how can they overcome these
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 in the upcoming paragraphs. First of all, learning a foreign
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 is not an easy task. It requires a lot of confidence.
People
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 who are in-familiar with the native
languages
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 of other countries
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face
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difficulties
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 to pronounce
that
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languages
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 correctly.
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,
people
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face
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problems
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 in writing foreign
languages
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 too because the written structure can be different from their mother tongue. Spelling mistakes are very common
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practicing
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 an alien
language
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.
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, English is an international
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. In
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 world, it is necessary to know about
this
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language
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.
People
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 who move as an immigrant,
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problems
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 in speaking that county's
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 because they
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fear
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 in front of others.
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,
people
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 who are moving to Canada for their study or work, need to know about
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 English speaking skills. If they know how to speak
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English, they can easily communicate with
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 living there. It will help them to find a job
,
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 if they know how to apply for work by making
written
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resume
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. The
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problems
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 can be overcome by
practicing
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.
People
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 need to give time to themselves for
leaning
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learning
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 a new
language
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. They need to show their dedication towards
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learning
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 a new skill. They can learn a
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 by doing
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written practice. They should read more books as books are the source of information. It will help them to know about new words and help them to make sentences. In conclusion, no doubt,
people
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difficulties
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while
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 learning an alien
language
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 but these
problems
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 can be solved by making efforts to learn.
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