More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating
Nowadays, almost all businesses, in
fact
everyone Add the comma(s)
,fact
prefer
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prefers
technology
for informal and formal communication
and they are unlikely to communicate in person. Though technology
has brought a revolutionary change in the mode of communication
and made it more convenient, this
may make people
unsociable.
Firstly
, using digital things can save individuals time and cost. To illustrate this
, you do not have to go to a particular place to meet with someone rather you can talk to them by staying at home. For example
, freelancers are getting jobs and conducting meetings online, which proves that communication
through technology
is much easier. Another benefit of this
is that you can talk to people
from another corner of the world within seconds by using technology
. In other words
, today people
use social networking sites like WhatsApp to communicate with their near and dear one's
who lives in distant places.
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ones
On the other hand
, although
technology
-based communication
has numerous advantages, it has some drawbacks too. The first one is that it makes people
less sociable. For example
, a recent survey showed that the
individuals who prefer to have online friends than Correct article usage
apply
an
offline Correct article usage
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partner
, feel shy and uncomfortable Fix the agreement mistake
partners
while
talking to a person by
face to face. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, their online friends may be frauds and if it happens, they will not have any reliable person in real life to express their feelings and sufferings. For
this
reason, it can also
impact adversely in
their mental health.
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To conclude
, we can say that technology
-based communication
is not an unmixed blessing for us and it has both merits and demerits.Submitted by englishpills077 on
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