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people's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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With the advancement and diversification of the production industries,
people
 are bending more toward shopping as there are varieties of
goods
 available in the
market
. The luring, vivid advertisements are one of the major reasons
people
 are attracted for buying new items even after already having the same thing with them. Some assert that shopping
behavior
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behaviour
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 varies with the
age
 of the
people
 and some claim against it. I mostly agreed with the given prompt above and
this
 essay will be in support of the produced statement.
To begin
 with, on the one hand, Looking at the global
market
, youth-based
products
 are predominant. Whenever we go shopping, though there are other
goods
 in the
market
, mostly wholesalers and retailer shops are full of
goods
 for adults and children especially fashion and cosmetic
products
. The predominance of
age
-targeted
products
 is clear evidence that shopping habits are influenced by
age
 group.
for example
, the youth of the
age
 between 15 to 35 tend to buy
goods
 frequently as compared to the
age
 below 15 and above 50.
This
 means that compared to old
age
people
, the youth prefer to go shopping more.
On the other hand
,
age
 group
also
 affects the choice of the product or product types. The god that the youth buy for themselves will be dramatically different from the product that the old
age
 and children buy.
For example
, Mostly, when children are taken shopping, they are more inclined to buy toys and gaming
products
,
whereas
 adults choose to get new branded materials
such
 as clothing, cosmetics, smartphone, bikes, cars, etc. for show-off among peers.
Thus
, the choice of shopping
also
 depends on the kind of
age
 group referred to. In conclusion, the quantity, variety, and frequency of shopping are greatly influenced by the
age
 of the buyer; but
this
 is not the single factor that shopping habits depend on. It depends on a number of factors
such
 as economic class,
market
 accessibility, profession, education, etc.
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