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Many professionals such as doctors and teachers are migrating to a developed country from their own poorer countries. What are the problems caused due to their migration and what can be done to resolve this issue.

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In the modern world, migration has become a common practice all around the world. Most
people
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 from metropolitan
countries
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from
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are from
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 poor
nations
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 .
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 essay will discuss some issues that lead by migrants in developed
nations
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 and it
also
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 provides different ways , where
this
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 problem can be resolved. There are various problems that can affect a country
,
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when professionals like
doctors
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 and teachers migrate to other developed
nations
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.
Firstly
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 , it is obvious that the health sector is a backbone of a
nation
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.
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, when
doctors
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 and physicians migrate to other
countries
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then
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 it will really affect the mortality rates , which can cause
due to
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 various diseases.
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 , only rich
people
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 will
be take
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 care
in
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of in
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hospital
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hospitals
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 and clinics
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poor
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the poor
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 will be affected by deadly diseases and viruses . thereby , causing inequality in
nations
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 .
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 , education is
also
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 another important element ,
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needed
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is needed
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 for a
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nation
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 growth .
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, when lecturers and mentors relocated to other states ,
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the literacy
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 ratio of the country will decrease dramatically . Thereby , affecting the economy of a
nation
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.As we know that educated
people
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 play a pivotal role in
development
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the development
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 of
state
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the state
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 .but , when most individuals become uneducated
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 it will really make an impact on
infrastructure
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the infrastructure
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 of a
nation
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 .
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 , causing negative impacts
to
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the
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democracy.
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 , there are many solutions for
this
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 development. First of all , providing more job opportunities in those faculties can report immediate changes in
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migration rates.
It is clear that
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,
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 finding
a work
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work
a job
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 in both fields in developing
countries
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 is quite difficult because of huge completion
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therefore
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, increasing job vacancies in those sectors can strongly influence those professionals to stay and work for the
nation
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 .
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 , wages in foreign
countries
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 are really high compared to developing
nations
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therefore
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 , increasing the salary packages of those industries can hold
doctors
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 and tutors in their own states .
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 , we can see that in
countries
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 like Canada and the Uk,
doctors
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 and teachers with good qualifications have more earnings and status in society ,
as a
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result
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people
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 are willing to serve in those fields rather than in their migration to other
countries
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.
To conclude
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 , it
obvious
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is obvious
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 y
doctors
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 , teachers and other professionals are relocating their
residence
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residences
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 to metropolitan
countries
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 , and
this
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 movement has
being
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been
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 causing so many issues
to
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in
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the
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apply
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poor
nations
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 and the best measure to solve
this
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 problem is to provide better job opportunities and high wages to them.
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