Many professionals such as doctors and teachers are migrating to a developed country from their own poorer countries. What are the problems caused due to their migration and what can be done to resolve this issue.
In the modern world, migration has become a common practice all around the world. Most
people
from metropolitan countries
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are from
nations
. This
essay will discuss some issues that lead by migrants in developed nations
and it also
provides different ways , where this
problem can be resolved.
There are various problems that can affect a country ,
when professionals like Remove the comma
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doctors
and teachers migrate to other developed nations
. Firstly
, it is obvious that the health sector is a backbone of a nation
. However
, when doctors
and physicians migrate to other countries
then
it will really affect the mortality rates , which can cause due to
various diseases. Hence
, only rich people
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of in
hospital
and clinics Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
while
poor
will be affected by deadly diseases and viruses . thereby , causing inequality in Correct article usage
the poor
nations
. Furthermore
, education is also
another important element , which
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needed
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is needed
nation
growth . Change noun form
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However
, when lecturers and mentors relocated to other states , literacy
ratio of the country will decrease dramatically . Thereby , affecting the economy of a Correct article usage
the literacy
nation
.As we know that educated people
play a pivotal role in development
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the development
state
.but , when most individuals become uneducated Correct article usage
the state
then
it will really make an impact on infrastructure
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the infrastructure
nation
. Therefore
, causing negative impacts to
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on
the
democracy.
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However
, there are many solutions for this
development. First of all , providing more job opportunities in those faculties can report immediate changes in the
migration rates. Correct article usage
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It is clear that
,
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a work
in both fields in developing Remove the article
work
a job
countries
is quite difficult because of huge completion therefore
, increasing job vacancies in those sectors can strongly influence those professionals to stay and work for the Add the comma(s)
,therefore
nation
. Moreover
, wages in foreign countries
are really high compared to developing nations
therefore
, increasing the salary packages of those industries can hold doctors
and tutors in their own states . For example
, we can see that in countries
like Canada and the Uk, doctors
and teachers with good qualifications have more earnings and status in society , as a
result
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,result
people
are willing to serve in those fields rather than in their migration to other countries
.
To conclude
, it obvious
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is obvious
doctors
, teachers and other professionals are relocating their residence
to metropolitan Fix the agreement mistake
residences
countries
, and this
movement has being
causing so many issues Change the verb form
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to
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in
the
poor Correct article usage
apply
nations
and the best measure to solve this
problem is to provide better job opportunities and high wages to them.Submitted by varshajose345 on
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