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People in your area are having problems with the internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter describe the problem explain how they are affecting people say what the company should do to help

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Dear Sir or Madam,  I am writing
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 letter to express my dissatisfaction with your
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 service in my area.Ever since I moved to Mary Brown Street, Brampton I have been facing a lot of trouble with the connectivity of the
internet
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. In certain corners of my ,house there is no or low connectivity. There are times when the modem automatically restarts. I
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 got the modem replaced but did not make a lot of difference. 
Initially
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, I thought only  I was facing
internet
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 issues
however
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 the whole locality has been facing the same problem. Though we are out of the pandemic, still the majority of people work from home and having poor
internet
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 service hinders our work efficiency.  I would request you to take action on
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be you can provide us with
internet
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 pods free of charge that will increase the connectivity.  Your prompt response would be appreciated. Yours Faithfully,  Navneet Kaur
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coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter is organized with clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
task achievement
Use appropriate formal language and structure throughout the letter.
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