The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The table illustrates the total number of
people
who are interested in exhibitions at Ashdown Museum
during the year
before and after renovation. The pie charts provide information about the sorts of people
's satisfaction with the place.
Overall
, it is clear that
during the year
after renovating the Ashdown Museum
has a larger number of people
much more than during the year
pre-renovation, while
the dissatisfied factors from the year
before re-building the museum
is
the highest rate of survey information.
In terms of surveys of Change the verb form
are
people
's feelings, the dissatisfied sector from the year
before re-building the museum
is the highest rate, accounting for 40 people
, followed by people
who feel very dissatisfied 30 people
. In contrast
, the year
after renovation, the people
who are satisfied are the largest numbers which are
40 Correct subject-verb agreement
is
people
. Moreover
, there had the same numbers of people
who feel no response about renovation both before and after refurbishment
According to
the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum
, there has 92,000 people
visited the museum
during the year
after refurnishment which is much more than the year
before re-building which is 18,000 people
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, museum, year with synonyms.
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