The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
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A glance at the bar chart provided reveals the proportion of Asian people who passed the driving test in a selected country from 1908 to 2010.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the pass rate of women was higher than that of men every year over
this
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period of thirty years. And the development of females showed an upward trend. In 1980, the percentage of women who passed the driving test was the highest, at below 50%, which increased to its peak of approximately 68% in 2000,
then
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fall slightly to around 64% in 2010.
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, in terms of the rate of women's counterparts who succeeded in the driving test, the figure for men stood at merely 30% in the first year, after a gradual growth, peaking at nearly 50%, almost rising by 20%,
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remained stable in the following decade.
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, the biggest gap between the two groups was in the first year, with roughly one-fifth.
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