With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered and some are even facing extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to deal with this problem?

It has been noticed that numerous animal types are in danger and on the way

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extinction because of prohibited hunting, city development, and tree cuts. My discourse ahead will place my opinion on

this

perception

along with

listing down the various ways to tackle

this

problem. I am of the firm opinion that it is

utmost

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important

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to safeguard

animals

. I have two clear reasons to back my view. The foremost reason for my outlook is the unmatchable use of

animals

in day-to-day human life. It is undeniably true that there are many things that are derived from

animals

, which if stopped could disturb

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living of humans.

For example

, a Cow. It is one of the animal species that help us to drink nutritious milk. If

this

animal type is extinct, lots of children and old age people can suffer from vitamin deficiency.

Hence

, it is pivotal to

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animals

. Another

reasons

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for me to support my stand is the use of

animals

to block prospective

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activities. What I mean by

this

is that there are many

animals

like

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a dog

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dog

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dogs

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that are used by the

government

bodies to check where the bomb is planted.

This

god gift to

animals

cannot be replaced by any technology, and it is used to date as

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antiterrorism

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mechanism. They are myriad

of

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things that can be done to solve the problem

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hand.

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helpful

government

policies could be the most strategic solution to solve

this

problem.

In other words

, the

government

should start promoting the various benefits of living in suburbs. They should make

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people friendly

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policies so that ill effects of city development like

unlawful

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the unlawful

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killing of

animals

could be put on halt. Another implementable remedy to alleviate the situation could be adding strict

norms

in our constitution by the bureaucracy. To be precise, there should be strict

norms

in every country for those who

found

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committing

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hunting

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of

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animals

.

For example

, in 2019, the famous Bollywood actor, Salman Khan, was sentenced

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years of imprisonment for unlawful hunting.

Such

norms

could definitely stop

killing

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the killing

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of

animals

.

To conclude

, I am of the firm opinion that protecting

animal

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animals

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is very important because of its utilitarian value in the life of humans and

the

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government

organisations.

Moreover

, the

government

should take the baton

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their hands by framing policies and

norms

to tackle the issue of

animals

getting extinct because of unlawful animal killing, city development and deforestation.