The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given graph provides information about the number of memberships for both women and men over the time period of 3 decades, starting from 1980 till 2010.

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, the women's membership numbers have experienced an upward trend,

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the others number have shown a downward trend over the given time period. When we look at the male side in detail, in 1980, the figure was 2000.

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it increased to 4000 in 1985. The total of men sharply went down over the next ten years, and it reached about 1700 in 1995. In 2005, the figure peaked at 5000.

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it dropped dramatically to less than 1000 in 2010. When we look at the rest of the graph in detail, in 1980, the total of women's members was 1000. The figure increased from initial numbers to almost 3000 over the next 1.5 decades. It fluctuated between 1995 and 2005.

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they declined to a bit less than 2000, respectively.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

159 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

membership trends
male and female comparison
notable increase/decrease
fluctuations
consistently
peak points
divergent patterns
parallels in trends
correlation
timeframe
cultural shifts
awareness of fitness
significant differences

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The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

some people think increasing the cost of fuel is the best way to solve global problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree