Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leasing to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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the world's ecosystem, and leading cause of

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of flora and fauna. In

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causes and more likely solutions for

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with, it is undeniable that many factories, human beings, and a lot of impacts

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quality

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of

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the ecosystem

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increasing day by day to explore

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scientists to start new discoveries over the world.

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climate change contributes to

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of numerous species of flora and fauna. To quote

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, the animal killers

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to hunt unique animal species for making a lucrative wage from them.

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beneficial

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zoo parks.

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artificial environments

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to keep the animal types from dying out.

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forests

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very dangerous for every part of

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the diversity

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of nature.

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universe have inhuman people,

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money, and they

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money is everything.

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conclusion, there are

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numerous ways to handle these global problems.

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these issues

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the future,

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that we should approach

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clarity and humility.