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select various themes at university in 2005.

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men

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female

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reach a peak in the social

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but languages and

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literature have a huge rate so, were used by

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literature number is 20%, 22% and 16% respectively. At the same time, the female

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tremendous percentage in three

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26%, just under twenty and just above

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ten respectively.

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a tiny percentage that

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