IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 4.5

A friend agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday

#friend #house #pet #holiday
Dear Pawan, I'm writing
this
 letter to say thank you for confirming your readiness to take care of my house and pet . Next week, I'm going to attend the birthday party of my sister ,and I will stay for a week.If you feel any difficulty you can contact me at
this
 number(2896972555);
moreover
, you can text me at any time via WhatsApp.
Apart from
this
,my dog jack takes bath every day, and she needs to feed three times a day ;
also
, in the morning and ,evening she goes for walk with me.Please keep
this
 in mind for the regular schedule.
In addition
,my flower needs water twice per week .you don't need to clean the house regularly, you can skip cleaning for some days.
Moreover
, don't forget to collect letters from letter pads as they may contain urgent information.I hope you'll get to know the regular schedule of jack and other household chores.Thank you again and see you soon. your sincerity, Navjot
Submitted by navjotguri on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: