Many people today are worried about cybercrime such as hacking and identity theft . what problem does cyber crime cause, and what solution can you suggest for ordinary people and business to take?

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humans'

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life. Particularly,

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cycbercrime

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cybercrime

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internet

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time

are concerned about crime, especially

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cybercrime

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devices which these devices linked to the

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moment is identity theft. The

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online

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plastic cards in the market and

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on cards in

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wallet.

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, the web area is superior effects for

hacker

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and they invade cards and accounts so

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stage is

money

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heist.

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to the population

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money

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from

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pocket

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nevertheless

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organization publish precautions on the site.

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remedy is

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perfect

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information technology

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and they must

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the accounts. Another possible solution is

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people should

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work

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attention and if they feel fraud moments suddenly stop

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of the process. In conclusion,

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next decade later, I hope

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hacking and theft will be

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portion, but the technology every day

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gradual

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increase and

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helpful and

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innovative

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.

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being unpleasant effects.