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obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.

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Well,
obesity
 is increasing day by day among all individuals especially juveniles because of
obesity
, there could be raised more health problems. Parents should take care of their kids. I will describe my viewpoints with reasons and solutions in the upcoming paragraphs. First and foremost, there are multifarious causes behind
obesity
.
Firstly
,
people
 spend a lot of time on electronic devices owing to
this
, they do not go outdoors for other activities or games
as a result
, crowds suffer from
obesity
 because
people
 do not do any kind of physical exercise.
Secondly
, in
this
 modern society, many
people
 like to eat
junk
food
 from outside restaurants and they do not prefer to eat homemade
food
 and fast
food
 includes plentiful spices so when folks eat that
food
then
 they easily get
obesity
 from
junk
food
.
For instance
, a recent survey found that 65% of
people
 eat outside
food
 and they do not have sufficient time to cook at home. So they quickly suffer from
obesity
.
On the contrary
 hand, every problem has solutions.
Firstly
, parents should not allow their offspring to eat outside
food
 and they give them homemade
food
 so that, children can avoid
junk
food
as well as
, parents must include more salads and fruits in their kid's lunch or dinner because children can get good habits to eating homemade
food
 from their childhood and
this
 age is perfect for them to learn anything.
Furthermore
, health authorities should do inspections of restaurants on time and they should make sure that restaurants provide fresh
food
 to their customers. To recapitulate, fast
food
 is not safe for everyone and
people
 must avoid
junk
food
.
As well as
, they should include more salads , vegetables and fruits in their
food
.
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