In today's world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

The development of
science
and
technology
has been significant for the past few decades.
However
, it has not replaced
artists
yet and
people
still enjoy their spare time with
arts
such
as music,
paints
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and books. I believe that these
arts
pull
people
’s heartstrings and that
type
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of things can be made by only human beings. Humans’ feelings are very complicated, and
that is
why it makes
artists
give
people
a lot of
inspirations
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. First of all,
artists
can share their life experiences that
science
and
technology
can not.
For example
, many books include histories or authors’ real experiences. Even if it is created stories, that could blow readers’ minds and expand their views. Reading gives them a chance to gain more knowledge and rethink
about
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their lives.
In addition
to
this
, The lyrics of songs are the gathering of messages,
such
as sympathy and encouragement. These messages often attract listeners.
Secondly
, the
arts
can interact with
people
,
whereas
science
and
technology
have difficulty
in
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communicating with
people
.
For instance
, live festivals are the interaction between
audience
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and musicians and that leads to a feeling of
the
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connection. In terms of paints, how you feel the paints
depends
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on the person and it makes
people
think that it is no problem to be different from others. In conclusion,
arts
are still a part of our life,
although
science
and
technology
have been sophisticated. In my opinion,
this
is because
artists
can expand
our
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views through their pieces of work and feel a connection with them.
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