Some modern artists receive huge amount of money for things they create,while others struggle to survive.Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation
cast , like many creative
society
, have to work hard in order to survive on the income they receive from selling their products. SomeChange to a plural noun
societies
ensemble
gain popularity and can Fix the agreement mistake
ensembles
therefore
charge a great deal of money on the
behalf of their work, Correct article usage
apply
while
many others never achieve success. I believe there are convincing reasons why this
happens, and there is nothing that governments can or should do about it. Individuals are generally believed to be willing to pay for something that they are fond of and would like to own it
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Moreover
, in the case of art, this
maybe
because they feel something is unique Correct your spelling
may be
or
exceptionally beautiful or skilful. Correct word choice
apply
Furthermore
, whatever the reason, I would argue that it would be quite unfair for any government or authority to interfere with this
situation and prevent the crew from asking for a higher price for it. Surely the public has to decide what something is worth, even if it means that less admired list find it hard to earn a living. In addition
, it is also
argued that list
are like Fix the agreement mistake
lists
business
society , aiming to sell a lot of their products and develop a reputation so they can raise their prices over time. Correct article usage
a business
Nevertheless
, this
may appear unfair to others who remain unknown, but if they choose to continue with a career in art, they must accept this
circumstance. For instance
, popular list
have spent years developing their skills, studying their majors and exhibiting their work. Fix the agreement mistake
lists
Hence
, why would a government deny them the earnings they have put so much effort into achieving? In conclusion, community
have to be free to spend their money as they wish. Fix the agreement mistake
communities
If
Correct word choice
This
this
means that some association
have to make the difficult choice of finding another way to earn wages, and no one can alter that. After all, not much in life is fair.Fix the agreement mistake
associations
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
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Stick to this essay structure:
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