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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that schools are the best places to learn this. Discuss both these views.

#people #parents #children #members #society #schools #places
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One of the social concerns today relates to
education
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 for
children
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 to become good
member
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While
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 it is often argued that
parents
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 should teach their
children
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 how to be good members of
society
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, others believe
schools
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 are the best places to learn
this
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. Discuss both these views. In my opinion,
although
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children
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 live in different
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environment
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education
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but
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in the future,
the
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children
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 will become global citizens On the one hand, it is argued by
that
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 role of
education
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 of
parents
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 for the
children
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Firstly
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,
parents
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 can build for
children
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 a lot of schedule of activities every day and help
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 discipline for
children
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. One good illustration of
this
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 is every day,
parents
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 can teach
children
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 to do the housework
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 as
:
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 dishwashing, sweeping, watering the tree,… it will help
children
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 learn to share work with everyone
Secondly
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,
parents
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 can teach
for
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children
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 a lot of good
habit
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habits
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 in
society
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For example
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,
parents
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 teach
children
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 politeness, culture in eating and drinking, care for everybody and
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 with people,…
On the other hand
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, it is strongly believed by others that
schools
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 are small social so
children
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 can
exposed
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 to an
environment
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 same outside
society
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. A particularly good example here is when at
schools
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, the teacher will
teaches
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children
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 situational behaviour to help
children
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 can overcome a lot of problems in
society
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. Not only do people create a good
environment
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 for
children
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 to
equipment
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 new knowledge but
also
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 the school can create for
children
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 many good relationships. In conclusion,
parents
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 should teach their
children
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 how to be good members of
the
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apply
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society
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. Others,
however
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,
schools
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 are the best places to learn
this
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. Personally, I tend to believe that
although
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children
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 live in different
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environment
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environments
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 and
education
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 in the future,
the
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apply
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children
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 will become
a global citizens
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global citizens
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