Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that schools are the best places to learn this. Discuss both these views.

One of the social concerns today relates to

education

for

children

to become good

member

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While

it is often argued that

parents

should teach their

children

how to be good members of

society

, others believe

schools

are the best places to learn

this

. Discuss both these views. In my opinion,

although

children

live in different

environment

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education

but

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in the future,

the

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children

will become global citizens On the one hand, it is argued by

that

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role of

education

of

parents

for the

children

.

Firstly

,

parents

can build for

children

a lot of schedule of activities every day and help

built

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discipline for

children

. One good illustration of

this

is every day,

parents

can teach

children

to do the housework

such

as

:

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dishwashing, sweeping, watering the tree,… it will help

children

learn to share work with everyone

Secondly

,

parents

can teach

for

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children

a lot of good

habit

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habits

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in

society

.

For example

,

parents

teach

children

politeness, culture in eating and drinking, care for everybody and

dealing

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with people,…

On the other hand

, it is strongly believed by others that

schools

are small social so

children

can

exposed

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to an

environment

same outside

society

. A particularly good example here is when at

schools

, the teacher will

teaches

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children

situational behaviour to help

children

can overcome a lot of problems in

society

. Not only do people create a good

environment

for

children

to

equipment

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new knowledge but

also

the school can create for

children

many good relationships. In conclusion,

parents

should teach their

children

how to be good members of

the

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society

. Others,

however

,

schools

are the best places to learn

this

. Personally, I tend to believe that

although

children

live in different

environment

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environments

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and

education

in the future,

the

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apply

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children

will become

a global citizens

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global citizens

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