The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 different areas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 different areas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the
amount
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of
wheat
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exported over
Canada
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, Australia and the
European
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community
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between 1985 and 1990.
Overall
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,
while
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the
amount
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of
wheat
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exported by the
European
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community
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increased, the
figure
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for
Canada
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fluctuated and that of Australia decreased.
Also
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,
it is clear that
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the
amount
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of exported
wheat
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in
Canada
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was highest over most of the period. In the first year,
while
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the
amount
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of
wheat
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exported over
Canada
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stood at about 19
million
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tonnes
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, the
figure
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for the
European
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Community
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was lower, at about 17
million
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tonnes
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. From 1985 to 1986, the figures for
Canada
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and
European
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Community
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rose to 17
million
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tonnes
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and 14
million
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tonnes
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respectively.
Then
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, the
amount
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of
wheat
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exported in
Canada
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fluctuated wildly and reached a peak of 15
million
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tonnes
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in 1988, before standing at about 14
million
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tonnes
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in the
last
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year. At the same time, the
figure
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for the
European
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Community
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saw a gradual increase and reached the highest point of 21
million
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tonnes
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in 1990. In 1985, the
amount
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of
wheat
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exported by Australia stood at 15
million
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tonnes
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. From 1985 to 1986,
this
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figure
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saw a slight rise to 16
million
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tonnes
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but later decreased steadily and hit the lowest point of about 11
million
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tonnes
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in the
last
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year.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, wheat, canada, european, community, figure, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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