The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 different areas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 different areas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the
amount
of
wheat
exported over
Canada
, Australia and the
European
community
between 1985 and 1990.
Overall
,
while
the
amount
of
wheat
exported by the
European
community
increased, the
figure
for
Canada
fluctuated and that of Australia decreased.
Also
,
it is clear that
the
amount
of exported
wheat
in
Canada
was highest over most of the period. In the first year,
while
the
amount
of
wheat
exported over
Canada
stood at about 19
million
tonnes
, the
figure
for the
European
Community
was lower, at about 17
million
tonnes
. From 1985 to 1986, the figures for
Canada
and
European
Community
rose to 17
million
tonnes
and 14
million
tonnes
respectively.
Then
, the
amount
of
wheat
exported in
Canada
fluctuated wildly and reached a peak of 15
million
tonnes
in 1988, before standing at about 14
million
tonnes
in the
last
year. At the same time, the
figure
for the
European
Community
saw a gradual increase and reached the highest point of 21
million
tonnes
in 1990. In 1985, the
amount
of
wheat
exported by Australia stood at 15
million
tonnes
. From 1985 to 1986,
this
figure
saw a slight rise to 16
million
tonnes
but later decreased steadily and hit the lowest point of about 11
million
tonnes
in the
last
year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, wheat, canada, european, community, figure, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.

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