Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While
some professionals are suggested to persue
their career within the Correct your spelling
pursue
country
where they did their training because they are more familiar and need less adapation
. Correct your spelling
adaptation
However
, by
staying in the same place restricted their learning opportunities. Being able to Change preposition
apply
deceide
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decide
work place
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workplace
freedomly
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freedom
also
came with some disadvantages such
as understanding the patients
cultural background in Change to a genitive case
patient's
patients'
medical
field. I believe that it is better for Add an article
the medical
students
to be able to explore new experiences and thus
be ready for knowledge adaptations.
Many students
who majored in specific
Add an article
a specific
field
Fix the agreement mistake
fields
such
as medical
or Replace the word
medicine
engineer
need to decide their Wrong verb form
engineering
work
location before graduate
. Some believe that the best career path for them is to continue to Wrong verb form
graduating
work
in the same graduated country
. Because they can use their training experienced
to help more people without wasting any time Wrong verb form
experience
to learn
about extra community needs. The less time they spent on understanding Change the verb form
learning
new
Add an article
a new
culture
, the more time they can invest in their professional Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
works
. Fix the agreement mistake
work
For instance
, some universities in China clearly stated that their fifth year
medical Add a hyphen
fifth-year
students
can only be recruited as a trainee into
Chinese Change preposition
in
hospital
in order to be able to perform their best. Even though Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
such
the
action benefits the Chinese government, from the Correct article usage
an
students
perspective, being restricted Change noun form
student's
students'
reduce
their opportunities.
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reduces
On the other hand
, we also
need to consider negative
impacts on the opposite side. Given Correct article usage
the negative
freedom
to select their dream Add an article
the freedom
work
country
, new generation
civil engineers could have learned valuable Add a hyphen
new-generation
constuction
skills or could be inspired by foreign architecture, Correct your spelling
construction
thus
wanted
to implement Wrong verb form
wanting
those knowledge
Change the determiner
that knowledge
to
their hometown. Change preposition
in
However
, there might be various differences between the country
they were trained in and their home country
, hence
, those lessons they have learned could not fully be used. Take Bangkok and Tokyo as an example, these 2 capital cities held significantly different transportation system
. Fix the agreement mistake
systems
By basically
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Basically
copied
how Wrong verb form
copying
JR
train Correct article usage
the JR
constructed
will not fully succeed in Bangkok.
In conclusion, on top of Add a missing verb
was constructed
freedomly
decide where their Correct your spelling
freedom
work place
is, Correct your spelling
workplace
students
should adopt flexible
mindset and be ready for changes anytime.Correct article usage
a flexible
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