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In the world, the pollution level in large cities is being worse. What are the causes and solutions?

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In many nations around the world, the percentage of pollution are very increasing every year and it is a very big problem because humans destroy the
environment
 and nature. Anyway, we can solve the situation so,
this
 essay will explain the problem, causes and solution for
this
 topic. And In my opinion, I believe that we can help the
environment
 in many ways and government should support us in the right ways.
Firstly
, the increasing
environment
 in the modern world comes from people in every life ,
such
 as driving cars, cooking and garbage from the house.
Secondly
, people always destroy the
environment
 ,
for example
, throw away garbage into rivers.
Moreover
, economic growth that it makes high levels of pollution
Secondly
To sum up
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