The graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kingdom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
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carbon
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dioxide
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emits
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emitted
for
every person in the United Kingdom Change preposition
by
Sweden
Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
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Overall
, it is clear from the graph that Linking Words
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the United Kingdom and Change preposition
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Sweden
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of
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Carbon
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dioxide
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score
. Italy and Portugal much increased.
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lowest Add a missing verb
had the
score
. Until 2007 Portugal sharply Use synonyms
growth
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score
to 5.1 Change to a plural noun
scores
rose
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roses
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considerably
climbed in Correct article usage
a considerably
the
Italy between 1967 and 2007.
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Kingdom recorded the highest Correct article usage
The United
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till around 10.5 increased which middle Add a comma
,Namely
carbon
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dioxide
emissions for every individual. By 2007 slightly dropped. The proportion of Use synonyms
carbon
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dioxide
separation per person in Use synonyms
the
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Sweden
showed a significant ascend from 1967 to 1977. Use synonyms
Then
, there was a sharp decline in the proportion of average Linking Words
Carbon
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emits for per person in Use synonyms
Sweden
between 1977 to 2007Use synonyms
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