The graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kingdom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kingdom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
The given is a line graph showing information about normal
carbon
dioxide
CO2
emits
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for
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by
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every person in the United Kingdom
Sweden
Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that
in
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the United Kingdom and
Sweden
decreased
of
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Carbon
dioxide
outrush
score
. Italy and Portugal much increased. In 1967, Portugal
the
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had the
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lowest
score
. Until 2007 Portugal sharply
growth
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grew
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from 1.1
score
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scores
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to 5.1
rose
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roses
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.
Similarly
too
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there was
considerably
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a considerably
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climbed in
the
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Italy between 1967 and 2007.
As well as
in 1967.
United
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The United
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Kingdom recorded the highest
score
.
Namely
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till around 10.5 increased which middle
carbon
dioxide
emissions for every individual. By 2007 slightly dropped. The proportion of
carbon
dioxide
separation per person in
the
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Sweden
showed a significant ascend from 1967 to 1977.
Then
, there was a sharp decline in the proportion of average
Carbon
dioxide
emits for per person in
Sweden
between 1977 to 2007
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, sweden, score with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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