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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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The fitness industry has been consistently growing since the beginning of
this
 century,
while
 an enormous amount of
people
 in
devoloped
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developed
 countries are inclined to pay more attention to their physical and mental state.
However
, an ideal approach to the exercise is still in question. Should a sportsman choose
a group activities
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 or hire a private
tutor
?
This
 essay describes the reasoning of
people
 who stick to the second option and states that
this
 latest trend is beneficial for everyone involved in
the
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fitness activities. One of the most popular reasons among athletes to choose a private
tutor
are
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 their expectations towards
the
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certain result after training. Because of
personal
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 approach
tutor
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 can adjust a program to a particular
person
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 needs in order to achieve their goals. On top of that,
trainer
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 often provides a piece of advice on the nutrition specifics, which can significantly change
outcomes
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 of
training
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the training
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 program. The tendency of choosing
the
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 personal trainer
instead
 of working out in
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 group should be described only as a positive.
This
 approach leads to a better quality of
individuals’
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 exercises and can result in happy customers and rich trainers.
Besides
, it gives a feeling of satisfaction to athletes, trainers, gym owners, and other
people
 related to the fitness industry. Taking
in
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 consideration the reasons for
people
 to exercise with
private
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tutor
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tutors
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, it is
unevitable
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inevitable
 to come to the conclusion about
positive
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 character of
this
 new trend.
While
 personal trainer helps to meet
individuals
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 expectations,
the
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better quality and satisfaction are logical results of
this
 change.
This
 is the reason why everyone should thoughtfully consider the option of working out with
personal
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tutor
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personalized workout plans
  • tailored
  • efficient
  • awareness
  • physical health
  • motivation
  • guidance
  • convenience
  • flexibility
  • exclusivity
  • status symbol
  • inaccessible
  • community engagement
  • social interaction
  • health outcomes
  • personal achievement
  • health-conscious
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