The chart below shows the current percentages of world land cover by type. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the current percentages of world land cover by type. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the current percentages of world land cover by type. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates how the current
world
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land
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consists of different types of elements.
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it is clear that
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are
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total
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of eight categories that exist. Livestock farms and forests take up almost half of the
world
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's
land
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cover,
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built-up areas and freshwater cover the least. First of all, 27% of the
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land
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is covered by livestock farms. The following are forests, which account for 26%. Barren
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is the third large coverage of the
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land
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, and the figure for
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is 19%.
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, slightly over 70% of
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land
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is covered by those three categories.
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glaciers, shrubland, and cropland each consist of 10%, 9%, and 7% of total
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cover respectively.
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, built-up areas and freshwater take up the least amount of coverage, and the figure for each element is 1%.
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,
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the r.est
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r.est
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rest
of the categories except for livestock farms, forests, and barren
land
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account for nearly 30% of the total coverage.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words world, land with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • land cover
  • forests
  • agricultural land
  • urban areas
  • deserts
  • barren land
  • grasslands
  • wetlands
  • biomes
  • biodiversity
  • urbanization
  • land use change
  • regional differences
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