The chart below shows the current percentages of world land cover by type. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates how the current
world
land
consists of different types of elements.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are
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is
total
of eight categories that exist. Livestock farms and forests take up almost half of the Add an article
a total
world
's land
cover, while
built-up areas and freshwater cover the least.
First of all, 27% of the world
's land
is covered by livestock farms. The following are forests, which account for 26%. Barren land
is the third large coverage of the world
land
, and the figure for this
is 19%. Therefore
, slightly over 70% of world
land
is covered by those three categories.
Next,
glaciers, shrubland, and cropland each consist of 10%, 9%, and 7% of total land
cover respectively. Finally
, built-up areas and freshwater take up the least amount of coverage, and the figure for each element is 1%. In other words
, Correct article usage
the r.est
r.est
of the categories except for livestock farms, forests, and barren Correct your spelling
rest
land
account for nearly 30% of the total coverage.Submitted by 98shs on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, land with synonyms.
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