1.Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
As we all know, Every people want to feel
peacefully
. Unfortunately Replace the adverb
peaceful
number
of Change the article
the number
criminal
in the World has been increasing so it makes us feel bad. İn my opinion, The main reason for these problems depends on the background of the individuals. Now let's talk about Fix the agreement mistake
criminals
solutions
to this
issue and reasons
.
First of all, i
would like to tell about Change the capitalization
I
increasing
number of youth Add an article
the increasing
criminals
. There might be several reasons
for the criminal background. According to
investigators underdeveloped countries have more susceptibility to crime. On the other hand
, we can say that crimes are related to their social life and childhood. For example
, criminals
who do not have the necessary education are approximately more %78 than other people. if we talk about solutions
, humans need to improve their education level. in addition
, punishments should be harder. Especially, if imprisonment rises, the number of criminals
may reduce.
in conclusion, tranquility
is very significant for people. As I mentioned before, there are many Change the spelling
tranquillity
reasons
behind the crimes. we should investigate the background of the crime as government and the public. we must consider solutions
because There is a solutions
Change the noun form
solution
as well as
reasons
. I firmly believe that criminals
will reduce day by day.Submitted by celilkilic on
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