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In the future, we will have more and more leisure time as machines replace many of the tasks we do at home and work. Discuss the benefits this will bring and also the problem it will cause.

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First of all, I would like to tell you about something which is the most important thing in the World. Nowadays,
technology
 has been improving day by day what I mean is automation is moving very rapidly.
According to
 experts
technology
 will bring some advantages and disadvantages. We can say the benefits of machinery are increasing in parallel to improve
technology
.
On the other hand
, we have to consider bringing some problems with automation. At
this
 ,
a
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point we can talk about the importance of
technology
. A lot of communities want to have more free
time
 for spending with their family, friends, and social life not they? Every people have to work for earning money because if we do not have enough money we can not spend
time
 with our family pleasantly. Huge companies invest millions of dollars in machines because they want to reduce working humans.
While
 an increasing number of machines a lot of people will be employed. the increasing number of unemployed may cause robbery, famine, and maybe war. At
this
 point, companies should be solution-oriented. Developing
technology
 should give people more free
time
, In
this
 way, society may improve their culture, language, and knowledge. As I stated before there will be more
time
 to spend with the family. if I had the power to change the world, Absolutely I would make society live more comfortably. To cut a long story short the future is in our hands. I hope that we will leave a better future for our children
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