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‏Every year thousands of students go overseas to study. Although many benefit from the experience, others go home disappointed. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying in another country?

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In recent years, more than more
students
 going abroad to study. In spite of that fact studying in foreign bring benefit, getting drawbacks is undeniable. There are many reasons
students
 studying abroad should be encouraged, First of all,
this
 is a
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specially
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 experience for
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the student
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student
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students
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 to meet different
culture
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 circumstances,
that
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 can improve
student
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students
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 international
perspective
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and creative
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creative
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 new cognition apply in future.
Moreover
 studying abroad
this
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is
long-term
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a long-term
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 investment,
due to
have
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 a foreign qualification
provide
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 more opportunities to get good pay job. Resulting in higher income and well
quality
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 of life.
On the other hand
,
although
 overseas brings so many
benefit
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, that had
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a disadvantage
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disadvantage
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disadvantages
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. First economic problems, studying abroad need to prepare
many
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 money to cover tuition, living and
eat
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, despite school can support
scholarship
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, many
students
 struggle paid to
living
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. Second mental issues, different culture and language problems lack
social
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 connection, rise
loneliness
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 and social isolation, lead to
increase
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student
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 depression
diagnosis
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. In conclusion, even though studying abroad still had drawbacks,
however
 in my opinion studying abroad
advantages
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 more than disadvantages. Studying foreign can involve different
culture
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, that a nice experience for
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the student
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student
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students
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, for long-term investment benefits outweigh
drawbacks
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the drawbacks
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 to encourage
students
 should study in foreign countries.
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