It is believed by many that
animals
have to be dealt with as friends.
However
, others discern that they have to be only considered as a primary source of diet and clothes. Whilst I firmly believe that
animals
have to be treated as humans for environmental and humanitarian reasons, I
also
believe that some species cannot become domesticated and have to serve as a diet and cloth resource.
On the one hand, one reason why
animals
ought to be looked at as friends
relatesChange the verb form
show examples
to their significance in achieving ecological balance
this
is mainly
due to
the fact that if
animals
were treated as humans, their souls would be sacred and their hunting would be banned. Definitely would
such
an approach yield More balanced ecological systems without the introduction or
the Correct article usage
show examples
exclusion of any species
.Change the punctuation
show examples
Some predators,
for instance
, mainly prey on certain types of rodents, and
such
a process protects humans from potentially fatal diseases
such
as plague. One
further
reason why
animals
have to be appreciated is that they usually bear the brunt of irresponsible human reactions.
This
can be witnessed by the disaster of the Deep Water Horizon which demonstrated how an oil spill could have a detrimental impact on marine
animals
in the local vicinity.
On the other hand
, I personally believe that the fact
animals
are the primary sources of food and clothes cannot be neglected.
In other words
, ingesting
animals
' meat has the potential to provide human bodies with a balanced and adequate amount of vitamins, proteins and healthy minerals which are quintessential for solidifying their general well-being. An adult male,
for example
, requires 50 grams of animal protein per day in order to be protected from some mal-nutrition-related illnesses.
In addition
to providing a balanced diet, animal skin, leather and fur have been always a major source of income for a large number of countries. An eminent example of
this
is Egypt which is well-renowned for its high-quality wool because of the ubiquity of greenery landscapes on which Egyptian sheep feed
,Remove the comma
show examples
and
this
has yielded a general prosperity of the national economy by importing its wool to other countries.
In conclusion, despite the salient merits which could be witnessed from respecting
animals
, I am still convinced that they have made a great contribution to human health and domestic economies.
Subsequently
, some certain species should be respected and domesticated
while
others have to play the role of the dietary source.