Some people think that animals should be treated as friends. Yet, others only consider animals as sources of food and clothing. What is your opinion?

It is believed by many that

animals

have to be dealt with as friends.

However

, others discern that they have to be only considered as a primary source of diet and clothes. Whilst I firmly believe that

animals

have to be treated as humans for environmental and humanitarian reasons, I

also

believe that some species cannot become domesticated and have to serve as a diet and cloth resource. On the one hand, one reason why

animals

ought to be looked at as friends

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to their significance in achieving ecological balance

this

is mainly

due to

the fact that if

animals

were treated as humans, their souls would be sacred and their hunting would be banned. Definitely would

such

an approach yield More balanced ecological systems without the introduction or

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exclusion of any species

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Some predators,

for instance

, mainly prey on certain types of rodents, and

such

a process protects humans from potentially fatal diseases

such

as plague. One

further

reason why

animals

have to be appreciated is that they usually bear the brunt of irresponsible human reactions.

This

can be witnessed by the disaster of the Deep Water Horizon which demonstrated how an oil spill could have a detrimental impact on marine

animals

in the local vicinity.

On the other hand

, I personally believe that the fact

animals

are the primary sources of food and clothes cannot be neglected.

In other words

, ingesting

animals

' meat has the potential to provide human bodies with a balanced and adequate amount of vitamins, proteins and healthy minerals which are quintessential for solidifying their general well-being. An adult male,

for example

, requires 50 grams of animal protein per day in order to be protected from some mal-nutrition-related illnesses.

In addition

to providing a balanced diet, animal skin, leather and fur have been always a major source of income for a large number of countries. An eminent example of

this

is Egypt which is well-renowned for its high-quality wool because of the ubiquity of greenery landscapes on which Egyptian sheep feed

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and

this

has yielded a general prosperity of the national economy by importing its wool to other countries. In conclusion, despite the salient merits which could be witnessed from respecting

animals

, I am still convinced that they have made a great contribution to human health and domestic economies.

Subsequently

, some certain species should be respected and domesticated

while

others have to play the role of the dietary source.