The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016.

You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: -explain why you are interested in helping -Give details suitable past experience -suggest ways you might help with the event.

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Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You have just finished a language course provided by your company and want another. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter you should say: - why you liked the course - why you need more - and say where and when the course should take place