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The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016.

A friend, who lives abroad, has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: thank him/her for the invitation explain why you cannot come give him/her other news.

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

Today single-use products are still very common. What are the problems associated with this? What are some possible solutions?

With an increasingly overweight population some think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?