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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016.

Some people believe that planing for the future is a waste of time because they think that focusing on the present is more important. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Angsa

Many people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops and public transport. Do you agree or disagree?

Despite many gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?