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some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There are a variety of majors that are
teached
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teaching
 in universities. Some individuals think that pupils should just be allowed to
study
 subjects that will be necessary and useful for the future like science and technology.
However
, others, including me, believe that
students
 must be free to choose
their
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the
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 major
university
 that they like.
First,
we should know, we can'
t
 confine
people
 to just
study
 majors like science and technology, because some of them don'
t
 like it. So, the rate of
people
 who go to
university
 might decrease sharply.
For example
, some
students
 are very good at art, and we can'
t
 force them to
study
 those majors, because the consequence of that pressure on society is irreversible.
Furthermore
, our
world
 needs all kinds of
people
 with different skills.
For instance
, one of the most important issues that the
world
 has is environmental problems,
such
 as greenhouse gasses, melting ice, and animal extinction. So, we need some
people
 that can be
teached
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taught
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 to be an expert and find solutions to tackle these problems. 'Studying what you like', is one of the famous sentences that most
people
 say. If
people
 do what they like based on their
university's
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university
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 major, we will see
people
 happier and work
efficiently
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more efficiently
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 than those who are not the same. In
Iran
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,Iran
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 there is a difference between
students
' major and their job, and almost none of them are happy with that because they think the time that they studied
in
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at
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university
 is kind of a waste of time.
Moreover
, if there is a difference between
major
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their major
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 and work,
people
 might suffer from
lack
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a lack
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 of theory and it might affect their productivity at work.
Consequently
, we can'
t
 put limits on universities and
students
 to just
study
 subjects like science and technology. Not only are other subjects important but
also
 they are necessary for our
world
. And we should know
this
 limitation has a very bad impact on our
world
. In the end, I completely agree that
students
 should
study
 whatever they like.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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