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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environment problems . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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the modern world , environmental issues have become a major concern for most countries .some argue extinction of rare species has become a serious environmental crisis nowadays.
Whereas
, others believe that there are other
problems
 that need to be taken
to
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 consideration.
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along with
 my opinion. It is obvious that many species are becoming extinct from
this
 world , and the main reason why some individuals
to
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assume
that is
 important to notify is because of
loss
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the loss
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 of habitation of
those kind
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that kind
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 of species, and
this
 has
being
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 the
results
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result
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 of deforestation and climate changes in
environment
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the environment
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 . Eventually, causing
problems
 with the momentum of nature.
For example
, we can see that in Antarctica glaciers are melting down significantly . Thereby, causing issues in the survival of polar bears .
However
 , there are other environmental
problems
 that are more concerning like water and
air
 pollution. Today ,
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 of plastic and the dumping of chemicals
to
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the
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water bodies are increasing significantly and as a ,
result
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 marine creatures are dying out dramatically because of several reasons like high ph value or poisonous chemicals.
Moreover
 ,
air
 quality these days
are
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also
 agitating . As we can see
that
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, there is a noticeable increase vehicle usage in these days, and
as a result
 , the rate of carbon dioxide and
other chemical
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another chemical
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 in
air
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the air
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also
 increasing . Thereby , causing different health
problems
 in people.
For instance
, in
Delhi
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 the visibility of
air
 is poor because of the huge traffic conjunction and burning of materials like plastic and other things.
To conclude
,
loss
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the loss
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 of plants and animals
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, as well as other environment problems,
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as well as
 other
environment
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problems
 are really concerning factors.
Therefore
 , I think that
are
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 should concentrate on both issues for
the
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Survival
in
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this
 planet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • ecological balance
  • pollinators
  • keystone species
  • extinction
  • ecosystem services
  • pollination
  • water purification
  • climate regulation
  • climate change
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • environmental degradation
  • illegal wildlife trade
  • conservation
  • sustainability
  • preservation
  • habitat destruction
  • endangered species
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