The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The table illustrates the changes in the
number
of people
in millions who travelled abroad in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that the highest number
was in 2005 to
Change preposition
in
Europe
, while
the lowest number
was in 1990 to
the Change preposition
in
Middle
East.
First of all, in 1990, the total number
of travels was 448.9 million
. By far, the highest number
was 280.2 million
people
who travelled to Europe
. The second highest number
was 80.5 million
people
who went to America. On the other hand
, the least two numbers were people
who travelled to Africa and the Middle
East reaching 18.2 and 9.8 million
traveller
, respectively. Change to a plural noun
travellers
According to
the travellers in 1995, the total number
was 615.2 million
. Most people
travelled to Europe
as
they stood at 390.3 Correct word choice
apply
million
travellers. However
, the minority, which was 11.3 million
visitors, went to the Middle
East.
Interestingly, the total number
of travellers in 2000 was 669.2 million
. Europe
was the most visited country among the other countries as it received 393.2 individuals. Next,
the least visited place in 2000 was the Middle
East reaching 13.5 million
individuals. Finally
, in 2005, the total number
of visitors in
Change preposition
apply
this
year was the highest one among the rest of the years. Correct determiner usage
each
Europe
was at the top of the most visited country in this
year reaching exactly 400.2 million
visitors.Submitted by malak.ayman1 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, europe, middle, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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