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Some people don't have the natural ability to learn languages. Some schools should force students to learn foreign languages. Agree or Disagree?

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People don't have the natural ability to learn
languages
 and some schools force
students
 to learn foreign
languages
 which usually leads them to have bad grades because of
this
 I disagree with the education system endorsing the need to learn subjects like French or German,
for example
.
To begin
 with,
students
 do not necessarily need to know a foreign
language
 as it will not help them to accomplish anything.
For instance
, in the UAE most education systems require
students
 to take French as their second
language
 even though they would not need it in the future unless they plan on taking a job opportunity in France. Peers feel pressured in pursuing these
languages
 and lack the education they are taught in institutions.
Moreover
, institutions should focus more on teaching pupils other topics or subjects that would help them apply the knowledge and understand the skills which would
then
 help them find a particular job.
A local
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 research done by
students
 in the UAE indicates that 85% of
students
 lack in academics
due to
 being forced into taking a foreign
language
 in their curriculum which leads them to have bad scores
overall
. Neither does the school give them an option of dropping the subject or give them variations of the
languages
 they prefer to learn, typically.
To conclude
, I believe that institutions should not prioritize foreign
languages
 as they are unhelpful. The system may have its reasoning for teaching
students
 the extra
language
 but the pupils should decide whether or not they wish to take a foreign
language
 based on their capability without failing their academics.
In addition
, they should
also
 be given the choice of dropping the subject whenever an individual wishes to.
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