Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter: •Give the details of your train trip •Describe the luggage you left on the train • Say what actions you want him/her to take

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Lana and I was a passenger on the train from Ho Chi Minh

City

to Nha Trang

City

on 27th March 2023. My purpose in writing

this

letter is to report the luggage which I accidentally left on the train and ask for your help to find my stuff.

To begin

, I travelled on train number VN001 departed from Ho Chi Minh

City

at 5.00 AM on 27th March 2023 and arrived at Nha Trang

City

at 4.00 AM on the same day. My seat number is 4E1 which is next to the corridor.

Secondly

, about my missing luggage, it was a 16-inches suitcase which was in pink colour and it had a scar on the right corner. The suitcase contained my clothes, documents and my laptop, so it was very important to me. It would be very appreciated if you contact your local staff in the Lost and Found Department to see whether they keep any suitcases as described above I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely, Lana

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter: •Give the details of your train trip •Describe the luggage you left on the train • Say what actions you want him/her to take

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