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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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THE LINE GRAPH AND THE TABLE BELOW SHOW THE TREND OF GLOBAL
WATER
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 CONSUMPTION IN THREE DIFFERENT SECTORS AND
WATER
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USE
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 IN
BRAZIL
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 AND IN CONGO.
OVERALL
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,
WATER
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USE
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 WORLDWIDE HAS INCREASED IN EACH SECTOR OVER THE YEARS.
FIRSTLY
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, AGRICULTURE SECTOR HAS THE HIGHEST utilization OF
WATER
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, AND
IN PARTICULAR
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, IT SHOWS SIGNIFICANT GROWTH OVER THE CENTURY, REACHING ITS PEAK AT 3,000
KM
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.
BY CONTRAST
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, INDUSTRIAL AND DOMESTIC
USE
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 IS LESS RELEVANT: BOTH OF THE TWO SECTORS REMAINED STABLE AT 100
KM
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 UNTIL 1950. IN THE FOLLOWING YEARS, THE GREEN LINE ROSE STEADILY TO 400
KM
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,
INSTEAD
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, THE RED LINE GREW SHARPLY TO 1000
KM
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, DOUBLING THE DOMESTIC
USE
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 OF
WATER
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.
SECONDLY
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, THE TABLE ILLUSTRATES THE CONSUMPTION OF
WATER
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 IN TWO DIFFERENT AREAS, BY CONTRASTING THE IRRIGATED LAND WHICH IS 26,500
KM
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 IN
BRAZIL
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 AND ONLY 100
KM
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 2 IN CONGO. THESE NUMBERS SHOW A RELEVANT
USE
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 OF
WATER
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 IN THE AGRICULTURE SECTOR IN
BRAZIL
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 AND
THIS
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 VALUE IS RELATED TO THE SIGNIFICANT POPULATION OF ABOUT 176 MILLION. IN FACT, IN
BRAZIL
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 THE
WATER
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 CONSUMPTION IS 359 M
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 IN CONGO IS 8 M RELATED TO THE UNRELEVANT POPULATION.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, brazil, km with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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