Some people think advertisements may have positive economic effects whereas others think there are negative social effects because individuals are not satisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In some perspectives, commercial institutions could gain more attention and boost their revenue based on

advertisements

,

while

the opponents argue

such

means of promoting provoke a simple standard of beauty which lower people's self-esteem.

To begin

with, since celebrities with perfect physical figures and stunning faces could make one's product more valuable, and stimulate a trend of imitation among young individuals, a growing number of companies are willing to invest a tidy sum in

advertisements

.

For example

, as one of the most famous underwear

brands

, Victoria's Secret is known in favour of hiring skinny models, they even refuse to produce their products in large sizes, making young girls proud of being able to fit in their clothes. Fast expending of

such

brands

indicates that they make a bank out of

such

methods.

On the other hand

, a growing number of young individuals rely on unhealthy ways to lose wights, including extremist diets or smoking.

While

those famous

brands

enjoy a great number of profits gained from

advertisements

as

such

, thousands and millions of young people struggling with eating disorders and mental illnesses. On top of that, those who are not able to reach that modern beauty standard see themselves as looser, not only will they lose confidence in public, but in some drastic situation, they might hurt themselves. Take those models on catwalks as an example, they are appreciated by many people,

however

, little do they know, to maintain what so-called perfect figure, those models are pickier with their outlook, which makes most of them dislike how they look.

To conclude

, it is inevitable that

advertisements

could benefit

brands

with their fame and income,

however

, the potential hazards it causes should not be overlooked

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

since they could endanger the younger generation, physically and mentally.

Therefore

, in my opinion, I believe there are more disadvantages than positive effects regarding commercial

advertisements

.