You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’ Do not write any addresses Write at least 150 words
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Dear Mr. Smith,
I am a freshman at the Faculty of Law and I am writing to you in order to make a complaint about the noise from the new restaurant.
As you know, since our dormitory is close to the newly opened restaurant, a number of students are suffering from its noisy atmosphere.
When it comes to problems, I have to say that students are having difficulty concentrating on their studies
due to
that terrible noise. Secondly
, all of us do not get enough sleep as it is open until midnight.
I suggest that you should limit the working hours of the restaurant, which would be better if it is available till 8 p.m. I ,therefore
, suggest fitting some noise-proof glass in our residence to prevent us from different loud voices.
I look forward to hearing from you with a positive solution to the issue as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Dora McKellySubmitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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greeting and closing
Ensure there is a clear opening and closing to the letter; opening with 'Dear ---' and closing with an appropriate sign-off. Try using 'Dear Governor' or a similar title if the specific name is not known.
single idea per paragraph
Develop ideas fully to extend the content of your paragraphs. You touched on key issues, but expanding on these points could strengthen the argument.
suitable writing tone
Try to maintain a more formal tone appropriate to writing to someone in authority throughout the letter.
logical structure
Present the problems and solutions in a more structured way. Consider using bullet points for clarity or expanding on each issue in a separate paragraph.