An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

#friend #holiday #region #information #advice #offer #clothes

Dear Emma, I hope you're doing well.It has been a

while

since we meet each other.I'm really happy to read your letter and excited that you are coming to India for two weeks for your project.When you visited India

last

time you never had a chance to come to our town but now am overwhelmed with joy that you choose my town for your project research. You don't need to worry about hotels to stay, as a friend of mine you can stay with me at my house and my parents will be happy

also

.Once you arrive I will fetch you from the airport as well.As an

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archaeologist you have many places to visit in my town which will help your project.In the first ,week I will bring you to see our world-famous Heritage site Brahadheeshwarar Temple which represents the Chola dynasty in the 11th century and their life.The architecture and sculpture carvings of the temple are amazing things that you have never seen before.I would

also

suggest you visit The Palace and museum of Chola's,Soviner shops,Kallanai Dam and Army Barracks as well. I don't have words to explain your arrival and I am finishing my letter here.We will see in the airport. Have a safe Journey. With Love, Maha

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

210 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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