The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The line chart below illustrates the changes in the value of Outokumpu shares in euros between January 2006 and December 2010 In general, during
this
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four-year period, the start was good and the company shows excellent results, the shares rose and sometimes fell, but it was not critical,
but
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and
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after a few years, the share
price
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of Outokumpu remains unchanged. In the period 2006-2007, Outokumpu companies reached a peak in the share
price
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- from 12.5 to 32 euros.
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, after 3.5 years, the
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returned to the starting point. As can be seen from the graph, in the period from 2007 to 2008, the linear graph moved up, and
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sharply decreased in
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to 6.5 euros, during 2009 the
price
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tried to increase. Meanwhile, the share
price
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in 2010 returned to its original value.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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