The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The line chart below illustrates the changes in the value of Outokumpu shares in euros between January 2006 and December 2010
In general, during
this
four-year period, the start was good and the company shows excellent results, the shares rose and sometimes fell, but it was not critical, but
after a few years, the share Correct word choice
and
price
of Outokumpu remains unchanged.
In the period 2006-2007, Outokumpu companies reached a peak in the share price
- from 12.5 to 32 euros.However
, after 3.5 years, the price
returned to the starting point.
As can be seen from the graph, in the period from 2007 to 2008, the linear graph moved up, and then
sharply decreased in price
to 6.5 euros, during 2009 the price
tried to increase.
Meanwhile, the share price
in 2010 returned to its original value.Submitted by dnm.best on
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