Under British and Australian laws, a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant’s past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

The law court process in different countries follows different rules,
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there are some practices, that, I believe, should be unified
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the globe for all criminal
cases
. In my opinion, the information
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the defendant's past criminal record should be accessible
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the jury as it might play the primary role in the court
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decision
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jury of the criminal law is not only making
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life changing
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desicions
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decisions
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for the person who
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,
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but
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society. In
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such
as murder,
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and other heavy
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of the same
crime
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might mean that the person who
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repeatedly
commited
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committed
the same
crime
did not learn his lesson and should be punished with
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. Hiding
this
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judge
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the repetition of the same
crime
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after the defendant serves the
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, we can look at the situations where the defendant has been accused of the
crime
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but has a previous record,
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could lead to
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cases
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global practice that should not be taken into consideration. In the common world, with so many types of security systems
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committing
crime
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became more and more challenging, but it doesn't prevent the
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from
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appearance
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of crimes, in
this
way I believe all the information should be shared with the
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judge
judges
prior to making
desicion
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decision
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